ladykatza

This is from a thread on a message board I frequent. You must write 200 words or less from the perspective of the opposite gender. Here is what I submitted.

The knock came about 9pm. You’re nervous, not knowing how comfortable you were going to a goth club with her. You open the door and she’s wearing a black wool trench and all you can see are the black knee high lace-up boots. The boots do you in.

“Ready?” she asks.

“Yes”, you answer,suddenly wondering what’s under the trench. She’s driving a manual with great authority and as she does her trench comes open and a hint of black stockings and peak of garter come through. There’s a push against your zipper and an uncomfortable shift. Once at the club she takes off her trench to reveal a short skirt and a long but low cut shirt. She glitters as she walks onto the dancefloor. You’re need mounts as her hips start moving to the beat and a red halo of hair lights up with each passing of flood lights. Soon every inch of her body find a different beat and the skirt flits up to reveal the full of garters and ruffled red panties. The ache tells you that the “Lets Just Be Friends” speech may have not been the best of ideas.

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